Been standing at this window,
watching you gaze at me.
You place your palm on the glass
and I put mine against it.
We talk and talk till
common sense tells us we must leave;
that you must work and I must study.
But always we come back to our glass,
to share our smiles,
share our stories, until the one day you ask
why I stand always on this side.
And I reply, a little sadly, that its safer here;
behind the glass.
Monday, 3 September 2007
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Life's all about taking chances and risks. Sometimes you just have to go after the real thing, move from behind the glass. Go from putting palms against glass to actually touching/shaking the palm and embracing the not behind the glass world. Liberation comes to those who dare,have faith and enough hope to try a new...
ReplyDeletebegind da glass may be safer temporarily but you need to get out there and give it all...just like prettylyf said. Peace!!
ReplyDeleteBehind the glass - protection from hurt but unfortunately protection from love too.
ReplyDeletei think it gets better for every update made......
ReplyDeletethat second line is aaaarrh!!!! and surely they truely looked to be close in love....
my first love story in uni was with a girl who was on the other side of the glass. she's still there - married to another.
ReplyDeletewas hurr...
ReplyDeleteI first thought of prison. :o)
ReplyDeleteThen I realised the glass ... cummon. Sex don't happen via the glass. ;o) Okay, I have weird priorities, but hey ...
Hang on, don't break it!
ReplyDeleteI love this..at least what separates u both is a glass and not a wall!With time, maybe u may be able to break it? Nice one as always
ReplyDeletetrue perhaps but remember "the box in the loft?" http://feather-behind-the-veil.blogspot.com/2007/08/box-in-loft.html. not sure i'm ready to get it down again.
ReplyDeleteLovely Post
ReplyDeleteGlass is breakable and box lies with you, nothing is impossible in a moment of passion.
No! Just go ahead and break the glass and see what happens...
ReplyDeleteVery lovely i muss say..
DEEP
ReplyDeleteimpressive! as usual!!
ReplyDeleteHmmmmm/....someone comin back so soon?
ReplyDeleteWOW .... very short yet extremely deep with a strong message. Sometimes, both people just need to come out the glass and get out of the comfort zone you know. If the other person is sensitive enough and bolder, they help you out with it.
ReplyDeletelolll...I loved this poem...
ReplyDeleteNice poem Love it
ReplyDeleteI SO LOVE THIS.... Sometimes are afraid to take a chance.
ReplyDeletewow... as usual... i have failed to make any more comments...okay i got one...two thumbs up!****
ReplyDeleteHmmmm..just passing by..
ReplyDeleteJust dropping by to say wusup! Have a blessed week and pls come back!
ReplyDeleteDeep!!
ReplyDeleteFeather, I was here... again...
ReplyDeleteyour blog gives me chills.. for it is so simple but yet so endearing and sweet. A great writer you are!
ReplyDeleteI'm here again asking..where is feather?
ReplyDeletejust gettig better and better as I read and scroll
ReplyDeletethis reminds mii of a long distance relationship
ReplyDeletebut then i get to the end i'm like
THEY CHOSE THIS
hmmmmmmmmmmmm