Monday, 10 November 2008

Soul's Distress

My heart bows in anguish at the choice I must make.
Any semblance of joy withers at its thought.
The growing apprehension bears down like a cloud,
the gravity of it wearing my soul down to a shadow.
For in making the wiser decision, I break my heart,
but more agonizing is that I must break yours.
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10 comments:

  1. KafoMonday, 10 November 2008 at 19:01:00 GMT+2

    this makes mii pause and do a double take and wonder about the decisions we make in relationships

    sometimes we think we r the only one hurting but this reminds mii that it sometimes goes both ways

    thanks

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  2. AnonymousTuesday, 11 November 2008 at 07:18:00 GMT+2

    kafo am feeling you on this, but sometimes feather you jus have to bite the bullet, like u said, its the wise decision

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  3. UnknownTuesday, 11 November 2008 at 07:20:00 GMT+2

    Love pains at times...I know

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  4. Ugandan girlTuesday, 11 November 2008 at 11:22:00 GMT+2

    Oh boy..."For in making the wiser decision, I break my heart,
    but more agonizing is that I must break yours."

    Been there, done that, bought the t-shirt..

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  5. Robyn.K.YTuesday, 11 November 2008 at 12:55:00 GMT+2

    A poet after my own heart

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  6. luluTuesday, 11 November 2008 at 19:40:00 GMT+2

    ive been there... and like robyn,...ditto

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  7. Jennifer A.Tuesday, 11 November 2008 at 20:15:00 GMT+2

    A necessary break up...:(

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  8. luluTuesday, 18 November 2008 at 09:40:00 GMT+2

    ive got a poem like this... different ish, i shall post it and let you know!

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  9. the antipopTuesday, 18 November 2008 at 12:54:00 GMT+2

    perfect chucking speech!

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  10. AnonymousThursday, 20 November 2008 at 18:43:00 GMT+2

    if it's the wiser decision then go for it...it's been a while i've been here

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