You came back about
a month ago, two years
after you left the country.
It was only six months
after the wedding and
still you wonder what
happened to your merry bride?
I see you looking at me curiously
from the corner of your eye
as you cuddle the child
you've only just seen.
You haven't said a thing,
but I know you're thinking it.
What happened
to the girl you left behind?
The one who adored you,
who worshipped the
very ground you trod.
The girl who would have
given heaven and earth
just to make you happy.
Husband mine; she died.
In her place is a woman.
Birthed by a lonely heart,
in a cold bed, amidst the
night shadows of a bleak room.
Thursday, 2 August 2007
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Good one here though sad.
ReplyDeleteTiz true we do not realise how much we adore our loved ones until they leave.
Death of laughter, death of lover.
ReplyDeleteFeather what's beneath the cover?
Scotchie told me to come here several times. I should have listened earlier. I should listen more.
ReplyDeleteBut was she the chaste wife?
Lovely
ReplyDeletelindwee: true that
ReplyDeletemorpheus: i think you're already looking beneath the cover. afterall, you're behind the veil. but i guess its just the season of things
iwaya: she was. thanks for passing by.
be silent:thank you.
ReplyDeletetis sad!
ReplyDeleteoh wow...sad
ReplyDeleteI'd not leave home at a time like that. Kids grow awfully fast at that age, and you don't want to be missing from your daughter's life when she is forming. You want to be imprinted in there, you know ...
ReplyDeleteAnd maybe marriages are like daughter's also ... dunno.
i just read it again and seen just how easily you can have conceived the girl to be the daughter. i didnt really mean it that way. when he went, he'd left his wife, still a girl. but when he came back. he found a woman. 'she grew up'. (i know, its like the poem before).loneliness does that to you. especially if you have to bring up a child alone.but it could esaily have been a daughter as well.
ReplyDeletesad but a lovely post
ReplyDeleteI love Morpheus' comment.. Anyway, I was here, lol.
ReplyDeleteOH FEATHER.. YOU HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS.. IF ONLY I KNEW MORE OF WETN YOU DEY TALK.
ReplyDeleteTime, it has a way to change things and people or is it the other way around?
ReplyDeletei was here too.
ReplyDeleteFeather, I love your poems. I must have said it before but I will repeat it just for emphasis! I think with time, care and love, her wilted heart can be nursed to life and to love again.
ReplyDeletebeautiful imagery there, gosh! its so visual! great piece! it tags at the emotions
ReplyDeleteyou are so talented... and thus far this one has touched me the most... keep doing what you do...
ReplyDeleteFeather u'r invited to the parrie, pass it on!
ReplyDeletefeather you have yanked the carpet of comfort from under my feet...perhaps thats what i will find when i return home...am off to rekindle...
ReplyDeleteahwwwwww how cute and sad
ReplyDeletewowwwww...so deep!
ReplyDeletethanks guys for passing by. it is sad but it happens a whole lot. believer's right though, love, care and time can nurse her heart back to life.
ReplyDeleteOk this is deep stuff. What is the back ground?
ReplyDeleteAnd the one about your heart in the box (post above), girl make just wanna cry.