If you'd asked,
I would have given it all up for you.
If you'd said something,
I would have put my bags down and stayed.
If you'd given me a sign,
I would have fought on with you.
Just so you know..
If you'd asked,
I would have given it all up for you.
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ReplyDeletethis is a bit sad
but also very poignant
i can picture the scene a man and woman meet after years of seperation by chance maybe at a gathering of friends and he asks why didn't it ever work with us, i really was going to ask you to come away with me and this adventure that is my life and she says
...
so yeah
nice one
====hey wanted to ask where this came from
ReplyDeletebut i guess i reserve it.
loved it.
I totally don't get poetry. Totally. I just know this is beautiful and I'm glad you are blogging regularly again.
ReplyDelete- Ugandan Insomniac
wow, this is nice and yet sad.
ReplyDeleteMe likey.
ReplyDeleteAnd I totally relate. Silence is supposed to be golden but sometimes it ruins the sweetest of opportunities.
Me likey very much.
Good job dude..Nice and apt...keep em comin..
ReplyDeletethe poem is sad but great...the poetess-i'm worried about....
ReplyDeleteIt's beautiful. I wonder what brought it on?
ReplyDeleteso sad,and laden with longing. Life with its collection of wouldhavebeens!!!
ReplyDeletei know what that feels like..been there, done that, bought the t-shirt..
ReplyDeletewell written
So sad yet sincere and genuine. And I relate and it speaks to me and I say if you'd asked and I'd have put down my bags and stayed, forgiven you and fought for us. If you'd asked I'd have gone back and walked the same line. Oh only if you'd asked
ReplyDeleteBittersweet...
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