Thursday, 5 March 2009

Whisper in the wind

Hush!
Can you hear it?
Can you hear it?
If you lean a little closer,
if you lie a little still,
you can hear it.
Its in the wind,
its in the breeze.
and think its saying my name.
When I feel alone,
I close my eyes and
shut out the world's noise.
I hear you whisper my name
and I know am not alone.

PS: am sorry i can't go on with the story, i thought i could but am afraid my thoughts run a lot faster than i can write, it get's frustrating and may be am just lazy, i don't know but i feel i can say more in a poem than i ever could in a story.

10 comments:

  1. Whoa. This sounds almost uncannily like me. I wrote something similar a while ago.

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  2. I have liked!

    *Don't give up on the stories though, you were meant to tell them. From when we was little girls.

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  3. I understand what you mean when you say you feel you can say more in a poem. It's beautiful too.

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  4. I love poetry..i live for poetry(ok not really) I love your poems. They rock..

    So you and Princess know each other...?

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  5. Princess beez my my little sister.
    Thanks guys

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  7. Oh you write so so beautifully and still you minister to a lost soul like mine. I'm not alone...

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