Friday, 27 March 2009

Here I am

Hear I am again,

imperfect and flawed,

made crippled and lame,

by the things I adored.



I'm feeling the heat

its not been a breeze

and i have to admit

life's got me on my knees



I look left and right

turn from side to side

there's no one in sight

none to confide



and i wish i could say

i came to you first

began to pray

chosen you erst



But I gave in to pride,

thought I could get on alone.

but I wept and cried

can't do it on my own.


Hear I am again,

imperfect and flawed,

made crippled and lame,

by the things I adored
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8 comments:

  1. David C BrownFriday, 27 March 2009 at 23:05:00 GMT+2

    We all need to be brought to our knees from time to time! That's where we learn His grace.

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  2. trybesSaturday, 28 March 2009 at 11:50:00 GMT+2

    I love the way you write with such emotions deep into your words..keep it up bruv!

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  3. Jennifer A.Saturday, 28 March 2009 at 20:56:00 GMT+2

    Wow...

    Pride is a gunner! I love this!

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  4. KafoSaturday, 28 March 2009 at 21:58:00 GMT+2

    made crippled and lame by the things i adored

    how true
    that we seek that and in most situations find that which ends up hurting us

    have a blessed weekend

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  5. BlogorattiSunday, 29 March 2009 at 00:58:00 GMT+2

    I liked it..Nice!

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  6. ~ScotchBiscuits~Tuesday, 31 March 2009 at 16:43:00 GMT+2

    I like:)

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  7. islanderTuesday, 31 March 2009 at 23:03:00 GMT+2

    well...on your kness is not a bad place to be....it's a step in the right direction.

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  8. Heaven!Wednesday, 8 April 2009 at 14:52:00 GMT+2

    just realised its been a while since i left a comment(most times the poems are so awesome i don't want to ruin the feeling they give me with a not equally good enough comment)

    ...so, Hi Feather!

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